This is my second draft of my short film. As you can see I have now added music but there are still some parts I need to edit.
Firstly, in the first walking part I need to neaten up my editing as Kyra sometimes retraces her steps when the angle changes.
Secondly, I need to make Emily's silhouette clearer as several people have commented that she looks like a man which defies my reasons for adding it in the first place. Also, one comment I got was that it isn't clear they are meeting for the first time so I'm going to change the texts to make this more explcit.
Finally, I found that my happy piece of music didn't fit with the music I have used for the rest of the film so I have found a possible replacement.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W5aZQw8449c
I have decided to use guitar music because when trying out other options guitar ones sounded better than piano.
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