This is my film as it stands. As you can see from watching it there are still a few sections which I would like to re-film or places where I want to add footage. I have already completed the filming for these sections and intend to edit them in in the next few weeks. There are also a few sections where I have some more editing to complete. For example, 'text scene 1' where I intend to make the gender of the person she is texting clearer by editing a translucent silhouette over the footage of the conversation. I also intend to replicate this effect on my poster.
Audience Feedback
I have also decided to get some audience feedback at this point because now is the time to find out if there is anything my audience thinks I could add.
In the questionnaire I asked questions about the areas that I don't feel I can fully judge because I am too familiar with the plot.
What are your overall impressions?
Pretty cool
I liked the flash back in the park scene
In scene 1 who do you look at?
The bullies and then Kyra
Is text scene 1 too long?
No but you don’t know who is talking.
How could I make it more obvious that Kyra is speaking first?
Put the names on or move the text for Kyra next to her
Could you understand what was going on in conversation scene?
Yes, and I liked the effect
Do you like the music I have chosen at the moment?
Yes
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