I asked a group of people to watch the forth draft of my short film to see what comments they had. Here is the feedback I received:
- I liked all of it
- It looked professional
- The texting looked good because you could tell who was saying what
- The lighting is really effective
- The acting is good
- The face over the top of the text scene is really effective
- The flashback works really well
At the same time my teacher was watching and these were the comments she gave:
- I like the close up of the feet as she walks around the corner
- I like the way her loneliness is highlighted by the time of year
- I think the music you have chosen compliments the piece well
- I think the shadow of Emily's face works really well
- The timing of the music is spot on - when Emily appears it stops etc.
- I like the way the focus changes to Emily when she is trying to say sorry
- I like the way the texts get bigger as if more desperate in the second text scene
- The lip syncing works really well in the conversation scene
- I like the change to jolly music at the end
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